Take Me Away (For Contest) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Even before I the last stanza I knew where this place would be. I want to go with you. This is truely a wonderful write. Take care and we might all meet there one of these days.(( Hugs ))

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Heartfelt and very touchy Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Sounds like my mantra, Karla: "Nevertheless, come Lord Jesus!" I understand and you are in my prayers. Very well written. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

"all the devils are really angels waiting to be set free"

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

I think we all drift in the spirit and desire for freedom....
This is so well done Thank you.

prayers and Blessings.

Peg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Only you can change your Hell, with Gods help.
Your friend......Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Karla, I have to say, if Texas is that bad I am never going to even drive thru, will just have to by pass it on my road to western vacations...This I like alot...Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Magnificient write Karla! I could
just SHOOT Ed with my Rifle!
We all dream of that place where
we can be free to do as we please,
you say. It is in our minds as well
as in our hearts, not the body.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

We all wish for such a place, Karla. But one question: Is Texas really that bad??!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

A beautifully poignant recitation of hope, Karla. I pray you get your desires...or at least the ones God knows will be best for you.Superb write, my friend!

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Karla, WOW! I am speechless. I do not know what to say. I have been KO'd by this creation. So much emotion and honosty....standing ovation. I bow before you.

Michael

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Wonderful way to relieve the stress :-)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Take me with you when you go!?!? This place called hell is real and we are living it... it's not a place in the core of the earth... great write... stay strong, Karla... love and hugs to you...
In Spirit,
Bear