sound of silence (revision and repost) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 4, 2004

Brava, karla, Brava~!!! I love quiet, but some silences are ominous, and you have captured this one with elan. Very moving. Brava again!!! Phyllis <3:)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 3, 2004

I wont be silent with my review,
I will scream same from the rooftops,
As Karla J Dorman is a whiz with words,
She can, too, be silent,
And or as light & quiet as the birds...
Excellent write, Karla, Peace From, ED & Rufuz in NJ

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2003

A morning spent with silent skies,
I'll take with kind and grateful words;
It gives me chance to sit with God
And hear His words through morning's birds.

{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on December 30, 2003

I can almost hear the silence:) Great write.
Safi

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 30, 2003

Excellent once again Karla!!

Happy New Year girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

i'll be content with silent skies ... can never forget the sound of that jet passing over ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

This is very qwell done I agree chilling excellence.

Peg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

A chilling write Karla. Nothing as loud as the sound of silence!
Thank yu and Karen for your prayers such sweet friends;-) Love, Eileen

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

Very touching Karla. I feel ya. Great piece. <HUGS>>>Mikii

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

I really like it redone this way. Well penned Karla.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

Yes, Kate is right, silence is unnerving!
Excellent poem,Karla! BRAVA!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

Yes Kate got it, the wrong kind of unnatural silence is creepy, unfortunatly we hear it or used to as an almost daily event, with the IRA, and protestants, so I kinda grew up with it, its only lasted 800 years..

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

excellent write, karla, about that awful day that i will always remember! the silence was eerie; i never knew silence could be so deafening! a terrifying sound, and one i hopefully will never hear again! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <

*NEVER FORGET!*

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2003

Silence can be very unnerviing when its not the right kind. Great write!