the dance of pain (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 29, 2004

Sad write but so expertly written. Beautiful expression Karla

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

I felt the pain too, karla. But the dance is good. Keep it going.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

No Pain No Gain No Dance!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Beautifully sad write....it's wonderful that you are able to portray the pain in such a beautiful way....I have chronic fatigue syndrome and I am very hard pressed to find any inspiration or beauty in it!!
Well done
Andrea

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Captivating poem excellent.

Peg

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Oh yes...Karla...I know this 'dance' quite well.
Good work in this piece.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

I have a friend with this. As always, this is a good write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Very powerful write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Karla...I have this illness too...sometime the muscles get so
spastic...I get back aches and headache...but after seeing
a chiropractor every week for two years...he helped me a lot..
I am doing better...but still have my days...I do understand..
hang in there...great writing...oh try ibuprophin...as it is
and anti-inflamatory...bless you...floria

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Powerful write Karla, very well done...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Fantastic write Karla! Beautifully crafted and expressed!
Thanks dear friend for everything;-)!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Ah, Mz Karla, even a dance in pain is better than no dance at all...my three herniated discs, while giving me alot less pain than you would have, seem to feel better after dancing, for some reason...Good to see you all, thought I would never be back...Peace thru the Write, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Wish all could be better....
well penned karla.......
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

So sad but a great write!

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Excellent tango with the pen. I feel the pain!!!!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

This was so moving Karla, I wish you didn't suffer so,

Reindeer