Bridge Across The Atlantic (poem) by Loretta A. Murphy on AuthorsDen

Bridge Across The Atlantic
by Loretta A. Murphy → (All Poetry by Loretta A. Murphy)
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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Open your mind Close your eyes The faerie bridge Before you lies...
BRIDGE ACROSS THE ATLANTIC Spun sugar promises Star gazer dreams Tied up with silver And ice blue moonbeams Rainbow of colors Reflect back the light Beacons of shimmer A bridge spans the night Ferry me over Troubled astral waters Safe in yer arms Contented and warm Hold me close to ye A heartbeat from heaven Snug in yer embrace We ride out the storm Remember me When I wake from this Dreamworld Memorize me The outline of my face I must recall ye Each night when I slumber Summon ye back to this Faerieland place Soft are the clouds That cushion our bodies Bury us deep Hidden from prying eyes All of my secrets All of yer magic Our dance eternal As the earth and the skies I will remember When ye wake from this Dreamworld I will memorize The outline of yer face Ye must recall me Each night when ye slumber Summon me back to this Faerieland place Meet me on the Bridge Between waking and sleeping I shall wait for ye there In the twilight of gray Be glad for this time Courtesy the Night Faeries For Fate separates us By the Harshness of Day We shall meet on the Bridge That Spans the Atlantic Bridge of Star Crossed Lovers Bridge of Dreamers and Fools

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

I love the beautiful phrases in the first verse--spun sugar promises, star gazer dreams and ice blue moonbeams. Why can't I come up with beautiful phrases like these? There's nothing down to earth about this lovely fantasy poem.
It's nice to read something so imaginative, but yet it's not dark like so many. Looking forward to more from you.

Connie