George, this is such a well written piece. I'm glad God sent me to your page, my friend. I'll be reading all of your your writes, past and future. Stay well, take good care of our furry friends and God bless you and yours.
A thought provoking poem that tells it like it is! Good for you! Thanks for sharing what we should all look out for and doing it in a precise, intent and exacting style. A new fan. Joy L. Hale
This is good! Sharing it with a friend of mine who does an Atlanta internet radio program, "Men Let's Talk" every Monday evening (6:30 pm) at www.love860.com . It's a Christian network designed to help uplift spiritual leadership among men as the anchors of families and community leadership. This poem rings very true of what all of us should avoid, for we are nothing but servants of the Most High God and servants and encouragers of one another in need.
Take care, glad to get back to your site again,
cynth'ya
I like this composition... "Beware of men’s praise". The subject dealt strikes ontological thoughts, and awareness on human's relation. A very inspiring poem... A treasure to add value to Poetry.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
So true. I liked the composition of this piece. You write in a very open narrative style easily accessible to the reader. The topic is an important one with which we can all relate. Good effort, George.
You hit the 'nail on the head.' Conformity is a word that I abhore, especially when the intent is to diminish my integrity. It always bugs me when others try to brow-beat and only then are they truly happy.
God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
Great writing,enjoyed thank you sweet man...stay safe and well...Hugssssss
A book-length psychodynamic study of pathological narcissism, relationships
with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder, using a new vocabulary.
must adhere to Faith of only The Holy Trinity.
Lady Vivian
A thought provoking poem that tells it like it is! Good for you! Thanks for sharing what we should all look out for and doing it in a precise, intent and exacting style. A new fan. Joy L. Hale
Cryssa
Take care, glad to get back to your site again,
cynth'ya
Be safe,
Karen
I like this composition... "Beware of men’s praise". The subject dealt strikes ontological thoughts, and awareness on human's relation. A very inspiring poem... A treasure to add value to Poetry.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
God bless you. Kathy
Thought provoking excellence.
Last stanza: did you mean "cheek"? :) Think so... still, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.