Hello my love, so long it seems you've been gone.
I missed you, when i slept and when i awoke.
Hello my love, you seem so content with our ways.
I missed the gentile kiss of your goodbye and goodnight.
Hello my love, your touch was so kind against my skin.
I longed for the feeling to linger even longer.
Hello my love, you whispered i love you but it got lost.
I wanted to taste the sweetness of those words.
Goodbye my love, till the night comes and we meet again.
I like the way you offered this insight into a love that though shared by only two captures the loves of many like it. Sweet, simple but full of intensity of young romance. I like this one a lot.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Be safe,
Karen
Fee
Sweet Dreams. " Parting is such sweet sorrow." Just thought I'd add-lib a little. (lol) Seriously, beautiful dreams and exquisite feelings.