The gentle warmth of your flame,
Melts the bars i caged myself in.
The quiet searching of your eyes,
Unlock the hidden depths of my soul.
The passionate kindness of your voice,
Erupts with a passion in my heart.
The secrets of your tender breath,
Gently caresses the softness of my lips.
You are my sunrise and set,
You are that whisper on the wind.
You're the rustle of the leaves,
And you're the sweet smell of spring.
You're a child's innocent laughter.
You're the belief in fairy tales.
You're the rise and fall of the tides.
You're the vibrant sun who warms me,
And you're the soft moonlight that guides.
You're the beginning and the ultimate end.
You're the quiet melodic ticking of a clock,
And the glorious chime of a church bell.
You're the crashing of the oceans waves.
You're the song of the pretty blue birds.
You're the melody to my symphony,
and the violin that lulls me to sleep.
You're the Earth with all her glories.
You're the galaxy with all its wonders.
You're who i want as my one and only,
And you're forever my one true love.
Jenn this is absolutely beautiful and stunning as it grips the reader from beginning to end. The picture also draws the reader in as if I were walking along and seen you standing there and asked what you were so seriiouly thinking about and the poem was your reply. I loved this write.
That being said the only suggestion I would make is to replace "your" with "you're" all the way through. You are growing every day as a writer and a romantic. Lovely write dear Jenn.
hugs
Fee
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Ron
Be safe,
Karen
That being said the only suggestion I would make is to replace "your" with "you're" all the way through. You are growing every day as a writer and a romantic. Lovely write dear Jenn.
hugs
Fee