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Release
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Your eyes tell a story
Of hope and of lies
Fairy-tales with unhappy endings
Dreams and uncertainties
Arms wrapped around tight
Cutting like tangled briers
Sharply cutting the skin
Slowly bleeding me dry
Bleeding the love from my veins
Heaven sends not its blessing
But lightning in the form of you
Striking me down quickly
Burning me to my core
Frying every emotional outlet
Your words tell of laughter
Creations no longer found
Maps to hidden wonders
Never shared to the faint of heart


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 Reviews of "Release"
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Nice work on this view of one's release of emotions through poem...it does show a variety of those feelings when one is walking away from an uncaring relationship...

nice work.....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Undercover agent for your soul - See's all - {willful} - Ted

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Although a sad topic...your lines translate the beauty of its wording. Superb work.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
They say the eyes are the window to the soul, beware and be careful.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
This is sharp and immortal my friend.....Well crafted emotional journey.....

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Sounds like a trickster. Not the right kinda release


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