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Betrayal
by Jennifer N Blum → (All Poetry by Jennifer N Blum)
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Fireflies dance in my head.
Memories of a happier time.
Pessimism blankets my heart.
Fears of betrayal beckon deep.
Turning on the mask of happiness.
Faking an air or contentment.
Thoughts running with rapid haste.
Shivers of disbelief creep slowly.
Wild eyed and angrily amused.
Darkness casts it heavy shadow upon hope.

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 Reviews of "Betrayal"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Love the metaphor for peripatetic thoughts.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
A cloud of doubt...

Ron

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
Allow the light of hope to shine eternal...betrayal is the ultimate sin yet can be conquered by faith in onesself.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Your piece is so deep and profound with only a tiny glimmer of hope. Maybe the optimism and hope will ignite and allow the light to come in.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Your lines are strong and get better with each write. Intense and personal as if you are telling us face to face how you feel. Great work.

Fee


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