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Jealousy
by Walt Hardester → (All Poetry by Walt Hardester)
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This is for all you venomus reviewers who do not write.


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A wise man once said,
"Those that can, do, and those who can't, teach."

No one is beyond your reach,
You sit there and you pontificate,
But never a constructive criticism do you make.

Venom spews forth from your keyboard,
Seems to me you would get bored.

But no, you seem to enjoy the fact,
Like every wannabe, you just can't act.

So put aside your venomus pen,
And direct your energies to look within.

Cause if you do then you will see,
That you don't mean one schit to me.

Upon my ship you can not sail,
So sit yee down now, and begin to wail.
                

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 Reviews of "Jealousy"
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
THE BEST ANTIDOTE FOR VENOMOUS ACTION IS A REMEDY THAT CONTROLS THE EFFECTS OF A POISON. IN THE SITUATION DEALT HERE, THE BEST ANTIDOTES ARE CREATIVITY, PERSEVERANCE AND JUSTICE.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Jealousy" for its poetic grand.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2007
here, here...I've missed the latest round it seems but I'm picking out poems at random to catch.. this is good and it needs to be said. Don't let the words of a few bother you. They are only words. Lady J

Reviewed on September 23, 2007
Aaaaaaah, I found it, it happen to just "appear" Sweet Walt!
and I hope these venomus onlookers, go there merrily way!
YOu say it like it is Sweet Walt, and we NEED that!
STrike while the iron is hot Sweet thang'~
Much love and WArm hugs, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay POsitive! Happy and STrong!


Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
GO GET UM TIGER! I adore you, Sweet Bro of mine! LOVE YOU! Sissy

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
Great to be on a ship sans the old shit! Cheers

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
The green eyed monster is a horrible thing to endure, nothing good can come from it, only hurt and strife. But ignore those that spew venom onto your pages my friend, it's your gift that they envy so...write on and never change your style, never let it sway you from pouring your words upon the page, for words are powerful...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
Jealousy is a nasty thing that can hurt another very badly...and yes I agree with you every step of the way....we do not need that kinda behaviour here at Authorsden.

Love Tinky

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
I am tracking you but never got the news about this poem posting until you send a general call.
Well, G. Yale is at it again, giving negative and preposterous reviews just to see his stupid name in print.
Matt said that we should just REMOVE the offending review, instead of making AD more difficult to enter for those crazy crackpots.
Don't give up, and we all should ask AD why Jealousy was taken out.
It is our den, isn't?
Georg

Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Walt,

Hear, hear! I agree: thank you for saying it better than I ever could.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
and along with these critics, who are the mysterious non-author readers, who never comment? A mystery to a newcomer like me. Somebody's clicking. Also mysterious tracker(s) who never come to your site--now that one has me worried. Good idea to put it out there Walt.

Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Good message in this one, Walt; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Well said my friend, and when the one who has no talent but to jab needles returns maybe he will finally get the message.

Fee

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Crap! Now, I will have NIGHTMARES of green eyes staring me down....
Shoulda stayed in the closet!
R~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
If someone is jealous of your poetry, it's because you're a winner, so pity them and make them even more green;-)Great rant!

ET

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
We all have our alloted talents in this life, and to get all greeneyed over anothers is really silly, coz your not taking time to look at your own and eke them out properly.

Well said Walt.
Y'all here out there, EH HEEEELLLLOOOOO!!! LOL

Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Thats THat Old Green Eyed Monste,, HES A MONSTER TOO

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Great!!! This is to all those wannabees, the entire tribe!
Princess Lacy Fern

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Ouch! That had to hurt. What was that all about? I can't imagine someone's venom spewing in your direction. Good one Walt! Jean

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
I like the direction your tirade is aimed. Many a closet poet reviews as he thinks he's a pro. Only thing missing is evidence of their poetry. Good for you!
Susan


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