I saw her last night I think,
Was she a ghost,
Or was she a dream,
Just a flicker on my screen?
Just a whisper in my ear?
A fleeting message,
On my voice mail.
Simple but clear,
She said "I love you."
Am I dreaming?
Was I dreaming?
I hope not, but maybe so.
But tonight again,
Asleep I'll go.
You love her very much Walt. And I love this poem. Thank you for scribing it so that others may savor your work. Thank you for the suggestion about replying to those that review my work. I have tried to reply to everyone that has left me a review. I have also tried to read some of their work and leave my review for them. I enjoy being able to see what others, think, see and write about. Sharing and diverse perspectives is what the venue of poetry is all about to me. Jon Michael Willey
Maybe when you are asleep you cross into another dimension and she was real as she was real, fantasy is only a distorted reality, while reality is a distorted fantasy.
She will be there...
Georg
Boo...this reminded me of a song "Ghost in this House"...most beautiful!!
Dreams are good friends...even about ghosts yeah!!
Sweet dreams I wish for you!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
And go searching throughout your dreams for tangible proof that she is, she is . . . she is . . . Careful though to keep it from turning into a nightscream . . .
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
God bless you. Kathy
xo Taylor
"I Saw Her" glows in style and meaning.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
She will be there...
Georg
Edwin
Be safe,
Karen
and hope she's a blonde or redhead?
Susan*
;-)
Happy dreams!
R~
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
randy
Dreams are good friends...even about ghosts yeah!!
Sweet dreams I wish for you!!
Love Tinka
George
Annie
ET
Or was she a dream,
Just a flicker on my screen?
Or just maybe, she's very real.