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I Saw Her
by Walt Hardester → (All Poetry by Walt Hardester)
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I saw her last night I think,
Was she a ghost,
Or was she a dream,
Just a flicker on my screen?
Just a whisper in my ear?
A fleeting message,
On my voice mail.
Simple but clear,
She said "I love you."
Am I dreaming?
Was I dreaming?
I hope not, but maybe so.
But tonight again,
Asleep I'll go.
  
Walt     

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 Reviews of "I Saw Her"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Dream or reality, it matters not. All that matters is that you heard her say "I love you." This fills my heart with joy.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
You love her very much Walt. And I love this poem. Thank you for scribing it so that others may savor your work. Thank you for the suggestion about replying to those that review my work. I have tried to reply to everyone that has left me a review. I have also tried to read some of their work and leave my review for them. I enjoy being able to see what others, think, see and write about. Sharing and diverse perspectives is what the venue of poetry is all about to me. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 4, 2007
I really like this piece--a quiet reflection seen, experienced. --Charlie

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Have you figured out how to rerun a dream. If so, please share. i've got few I'd love to review!
xo Taylor

Reviewed on October 7, 2007
This is a well composed poemization of an illusion of a dream that can be materialized if time allows, and the dreamer keep on dreaming.

"I Saw Her" glows in style and meaning.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Maybe this one won't kick the s**t out of you Walt:) That would be a bad way to wake up from a dream. Jean

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Maybe when you are asleep you cross into another dimension and she was real as she was real, fantasy is only a distorted reality, while reality is a distorted fantasy.
She will be there...
Georg

Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Sleep Walt and expect another whisper, a fleeting message and a flicker on the screen. Great poem. Smile

Reviewed by G Yale (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
This is a nice read.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
sweet dreams always Walt,,, Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
the image is awesome and is perfect for the write

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Cute...As long as it wasn't a nightmare you should be allright ;) Doesn't sound like sleep is what you two need ;)

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Like the picture Walt! Nice write and so mysterious, but very interesitng....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
I agree with Eileen
and hope she's a blonde or redhead?

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Turn in early so it'll be a longer dream this time. Maybe she'll be a ghostess with the mostess! Hmmm...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Beauty in words and technicolored memories. Nice poem Walt!

Susan*

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Oohh, Walt! That is sooo nice! Isn't lalaland a great place to be?
;-)
Happy dreams!
R~

Reviewed on October 4, 2007
:) This one made me smile, Walt, well done! On to dreamland!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Wonderful write, Walt; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
hmm, dreams do bring us closer to loves lost and found. makes the next day all that much better.

randy

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
No Baby, That was her lovin spirit, coming to you! You are adored and loved! LOVE YA! Sissy

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Ah, to sleep, perchance to dream. Lovely.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Boo...this reminded me of a song "Ghost in this House"...most beautiful!!

Dreams are good friends...even about ghosts yeah!!

Sweet dreams I wish for you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
And go searching throughout your dreams for tangible proof that she is, she is . . . she is . . . Careful though to keep it from turning into a nightscream . . .

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Sounds like nice dreams... blessings, Holly

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Pleasant dreaming.

George

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Lovely.

Annie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
If it feels good who cares where it came from, enjoy! Love the poem!

ET

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Was she a ghost,
Or was she a dream,
Just a flicker on my screen?

Or just maybe, she's very real.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
It's already been created-----Ted


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