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If
by Walt Hardester → (All Poetry by Walt Hardester)
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If I don't see another leaf fall,
If I don't see my grandchildren grow tall.
If tonight God takes me home,
At least I'll know, I've not been alone.

I've had an angel walking beside me,
Through times of sorrow, in times of glee.

She has been there all the time, you see,
Only wanting me to be,
Free of these Earthly bonds,
Finally to set my spirit free.

In times of doubt she comforted me,
Then she kicked the shit out of me.
Hoping to get my attention....She did.


Walt

       

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 Reviews of "If"
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
If I were you, I'd do what she tells you! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
You are so ADORABLE! I LOVE YOU! Sissy
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 9, 2007
I like your angel - everyone should have such a passionate one!
Outstanding poem, with a truly upbeat ending.

Kathy
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Intriguing and profound... "If" flows beautifully. Enjoyable and wise composition.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Very unexpected endind Walt. Never know what you'll come out with next. Cute one. Jean
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Excellent write, Walt, and that pic: WOW!! Magnificent Northern Lights!! Very well done; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Nice ending, funny. Those angels! You never know...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
In times of doubt she comforted me,
Then she kicked the shit out of me.

Wow! Sounds like a most interesting Angel!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
I am sure even good angels have a temper ....and a kick from an angel of that calliber justify the meaning of...kick ass good.lol!!

If anything should happen...love is eternal...even twisted love like mine...okay!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
That one was a twisted one, all formal and poetic, a down to earth words from a wise man telling us something....
And then WHAM!!! here comes the end!
You or your Muse in a funny mood?
Great as always.
Georg
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
What a twist at the end! You got me, Walt: well done!

And that pic.....ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
interesting close!i guess any truly good friend will kick our butts when we need it
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Walt, I just love your humor! Always leaving that one little piece for the very end. True or not your writing is always interesting....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
What a finale! So glad she's still with you! Another fine poem, Walt!

ET
Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Beautiful, timely and brutally honest. thanks.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Gotta watch those irate angels . . . LOL . . .
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Walt,,, Now that she got your undivided attention,, I think you need to go out and watch those leaves fall,, and your grandchildren grow tall........
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Sometimes Walt old buddy that is exactly what we need to get our lifes back on track...a good kick in the britches.

Fee
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
I'll just bet your angel just wants to see you become the best you can be.

I have no doubt about this!

Susan*
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Enjoyed this one Walt, blessings, holly
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