She Is (poem) by Walt Hardester on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

So much expressed in a few well chosen words! YOU GO BRO! LOVE YOU! Sissy

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 9, 2007

This LOVE is obviously a work-in-progress.

Kathy

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on October 8, 2007

She's all that! lucky you!
R~

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Oh this is good. Actually my friend, it is more of a haiku than you may think. The five/seven/five syllable thing is not the end all for what is a haiku/senryu. You did a fine job with this.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Two thirds...egh! The other third...is drool...right!?
Now look who's amazing who! :)
Great write!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Talk about short and sweet and to the point. LOL :) Jean

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Walt, go on and finish this...I want to see the end product. I like the two thirds but can't wait to see the remainder.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

It ain't bragging if its da truff . . .

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Gives us just aenough of a taste to want more.
Hai...KUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

God bless you!
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

lucky her, lucky you-beautiful

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

every man will have to eat their hearts out,,,,

Christine

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Great stuff, but were's the picture? Blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Well this is two thirds wonderful LOL,stay safe and well...HUgss

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Interesting concept and I think when it comes to a one line one you will know doubt say... "She is love"

Fee

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Well baby doll, write on, write on. ;)

Love ya, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Ga-ga with love...we see.
Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Two Thirds of a Haiku - Fascinating. Perhaps you should name this epic poetic form - a Waltiku!

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

The line will come, I know it will!

George

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Hope it will end with "She is who She is!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

A beautiful minimalist of a poem, not necessary a haiku.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Since one stanza is missing, does that make it a One-ku?? *grins*

Beautiful little write; tiny in presentation, but whoa, packs a mighty wallop! Very well done; bravo!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 6, 2007

Walt,

I love this one: You--and she--are beautiful!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 6, 2007

No wasted words in this one Walt! Making sure to keep your treasure,no matter what! Must be a worthy one;-)!A gem!

ET