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Orphaned
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Orphaned now I am,
Parents both dead.
What causes me dread?

Lost as in the flotsam and jetsam,
I am.
No wife to care for me,
Gone she is too.

Am I relegated to a solitary life,
Of sailboats and new people,
The Marina lifestyle?

Such is my fate,
Is it so bad?

© 2008 Walt Hardester
 

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Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Hey I never clicked on this back in Feb. I like this because - replace that absolutely beautiful boat and sailing life with a tired old piano and a worn out musician AND this is my SONG TOO! Both parents dead, no wife or girl - but I'm (for now) STUCK in my weed patch! Do it man - all the things you love while there's time - SAIL! (and bring the Last Renaissance Man along - it's a good sailor's novel (and a copy of my CD (soon) what better ocean music!
PS: can't blame me for putting in a plug can ya?)

Reviewed on February 20, 2008
NOt so bad, if WHERE he placed you
Happiness still finds YOu!
Sweet pen Walt!
To accept what is
give you reason for your heart
to give!
A marina's life sounds GREAT to me, the sights you see, the beauty of hearts unknown, the lesson in a poem!
STay Positive!

Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace! and I'm so sorry about your parents passing! STay Strong and share their memories your lifelong!Give yourself a big hug, you lug! :)ooxxooxxooo

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
...pen of hope and acceptance...riding upon the sea of sadness...sometimes when the sun glistens on the water...one does not feel so alone.
John

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
NO! We make our nest what it is. Perhaps your inner self wants tthe solitude to get it all together. Love and blessings,
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
our lives are full of trials and pain, we must pick up the anchor and sail on.,,,

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Walt no one is meant to live their life alone, t6hat is why God had two of everything put on Noahs ark,Just be ptient and take the time to relax and enjoy, give yourself time to reach that prfect mate. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
I think our fate is what we make of it. After my shock and dismay from my divorce wore off, I eventually reveled in my freedom, and vowed never to marry again - but I did, and now I am happy as a married man, once more. But sailing free as the breeze sounds mighty fine, too!

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Walt, is it a coincidence that you would share this poem on the anniversary of the death of my father in 1965 in a truck train wreck. Even 43 years later, I still remember.

I feel blessed that I have my AD family.

Larry

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
hey Walt,still waiting for the call,I've never been on a sail boat[hint hint hint]I understand those moments when that huge wave of life crashes into your, face to remind you of everything you thought you forgot about,and was past....nice write...matey....or I mead skipper..or is that captain,, how about Walt,
stan

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Although there is loneliness in this poem that you've written, I can also sense hope. And the photo...gorgeous...makes me wish I was there!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Awww, Walt, here I thought you had real class, but a sailboat...? Sell it, pick up a Nordhavn 40 to 46 or 47 and travel the world...Ed

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
A solitary life, perhaps, but NOT a hermitage. Yet, sun, fun, the sea, meeting new folks, broadening your horizons - not too bad. I'd offer to be your first mate, but I think Steve would disapprove. LOL

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
"No, no, no.
You'll find your dream woman out there
on the open seas even though she be a mermaid?
Ron

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Great writing,sailing is great for ya..I love it..stay safe and well sweet man..if you have your health you have everything believe me.....Hugssssssss

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
If she's gone for good, get out and do some shopping and fishing!!! More fish in the sea, they say. Don't let anyone tell you all the good ones are taken. Hogwash! There are plenty of good ones. Maybe you need a Colombian!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Life is what you make it and yours doesn't sound too bad at all.

Reviewed on February 15, 2008
I detect an undercurrent of cynism here, Yachtclubs, marinas, margaritas, sailboat, no snow, no parents, a very streneous life, what could entice you to be lonesome? an open sea of opportunity?
Snap out of it, pronto, my friend, rich opportunities await you!
Go get! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
From what I can see here, Wally, it ain't bad at all! What's it gonna be... naggy rae at home, or freedom on the sea, talking to the dolphins?
No worries, mate! I'd take the latter!
ribit~

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Walt, I feel the loneliness in this writing...the feelings of being a lone and full of anxieties. You've captured a great canvas here of a person with their head hanging low with feelings of rejection and pain, but with a desire for a new beginning. This is sad but a great write!

Reviewed on February 15, 2008
I'm sorry for the loss of your parents. You only become lost if you allow yourself to be. A solitary lifestyle might not be too bad - you don't have to answer to anyone but yourself (and to God, of course LOL). I'd join you on the high seas, if I could -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Karen would join you, but she can't swim - took lessons three times, she floats - like a rock - straight down!


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