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If I tell You I Love You
by Walt Hardester → (All Poetry by Walt Hardester)
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If I tell You I Love You

If I tell you I love You, it’s only the beginning, for we.
Maybe things each never meant to be seen,
Are waiting ‘neath the surface.
An everlasting sheen

When can we be,
Never it seems.
For no one seems to nudge you see,
Wrapped in our own infirmity.

Move on we must,
Lest we choke,
On our own dust.

©2008 Walt Hardester
  

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 Reviews of "If I tell You I Love You"
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
The beginning, for we. I like that a lot.
ribit~
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
unrequited love -- a tragedy of tragedys -- a heart sent to dwell in the darkest closet of dismay -- very touching Walt -- hope it is not true, and not you -- peace my friend -- JMW
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
"IF"! So many things are wrapped up in the supposition of "if". Life is iffy at its best.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Your last three lines, say it all.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
A saddness of a hidden love affair never uncovered. I feel it within each line Walt. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
Powerfully penned - well done, Walt -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
Filled with such bittersweet sadness, yet a scenario that has been played out many times, well done...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
Oh my,so sad...Hugssss
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
"If you tell me you love me", I will send you to a psychologist...e
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
The sadest words ever spoken are the words left unsaid.

Fee
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