"The Dance" is a psychological state of being Walt. You are right on. When two lovers dance their dance it is a waltz and a samba. I like your metaphor. Send us another when you get the urge to write a spell. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
A beautiful poetic tribute to love as so few seem to experience it.
John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
I've heard it said that passion can override the years. Ah, but in real time, it is a miracle that it does.
I don't mean to take one thing away from your poem, which I found to be well-written and sincere. An pure love can certainly withstand the years, but physical attraction? Maybe that does taper of a bit as we age and grow sturdier. Haha!
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Regis
another year has passed since this beautiful write...p
Anna
Newfie Hugs, Rose
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Peace, love and light,
Amber
John
I don't mean to take one thing away from your poem, which I found to be well-written and sincere. An pure love can certainly withstand the years, but physical attraction? Maybe that does taper of a bit as we age and grow sturdier. Haha!