I was Young Once, Danc ing on the Edge
Young one
so fearless
nearer that edge
I was fearless, once
I once was young
I tempted fate
hanging high on
that edge
of life and death
so I say; today
I will take no risk
I have seen
from down below
the undercut cliffs
you dance upon
so fearlessly
So, I shall
look…………….. away
dance,dance dance
I shall sit
and drink my tea
if by chance
or ,should it be fate
you do not return
I will cry for help
sound the alarm
but I know
you are gone
down
into that icy water
on the bottom of that
glacier pond
Your pack I will return
to your family
and I will remember
The time, when
you danced
dancing so fearlessly on
that edge, and when I
was once a
Young One
Snassano 08-08-08
Love the double meaning and message of the poem...
cryssa
The edge is always out there, not easy to resist.
-gene.
the edge as a allusion to every tempting thing, every dangerous thing, every daring thing a soul can want. .. .
this actually amde me feel despair. hmmmm.. ..
+me+
Myrna