I agree Jasmin. Drawing in the reader to wonder if the ripe one in June and the prune in the fall just happens to be the reader!
Done it again Jasmin!
Ann
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
New depths create new heights
Feelings he was astound
Sang more tonal now a tune
With resonance and deep
Both of winters place and June!
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Exquisite in expression and wisdom, JH
Gina
Kathy
Done it again Jasmin!
Ann
I concur with Regis (below); you have the ability to draw your readers in and make them feel your poetry. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regis