Just a word or two!
Struck by lightening, on a cold winters day,
As on my keyboard, I slave away,
Someone didn’t like, what I had to say,
Me thinks,
Being of a democratic mind, and free,
I thought this was the way to be,
Someone else did not agree,
To bad,
It’s a sad and doggone crime,
To just, make a few words rhyme,
And write, to God a line,
Dear me,
But don’t worry, my dear friends,
I will pray, and make amends,
All of it, in wisdom ends,
I think,
Somehow knew, that this would happen,
Get from God a slappin,
No meanness he was lacking,
Ouch!
Though I was severely pounded,
Worse, it could have been, but I was grounded,
Much worse, than as it sounded,
What!
In the end, it was time well spend,
I’ll say it as it is, without a bend,
To anyone an ear will lend,
Will too!
12/02/2008
And, comparing, we will know who are the good critics of our work.
Me too like your response.
Georg
Love, Christine
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Sometimes I think my muse is bi polar...LOL It's gone off the deep end more than once! LOL
Love,
ET
Be always safe,
Karen
I love what your pen has to say - write (right) away! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.