Double andante! (poem) by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER on AuthorsDen

Double andante!
by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER → (All Poetry by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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And despite that the word is patented by Georg, and very smelly,if it has an impact on growing better roses, so be it.
*The thought police are not too bright,* *To put it gently and polite,* *Will tell you what is right,* *Lay in wait, to ambush thought,* *That their attention caught,* *And their disdain has brought,* *Pre-conclusions from the start,* *No one such a thought should part,* *Into the common publics mart,* *Their basis for such drivel drive,* *From the know it alls derive,* *Those queen bees of the hive,* *Never mind your protest,* *That with special gifts you’re blessed* *Just as well you jest,* *But then you have to play the joker,* *Or underhanded poker,* *Your only tool the stoker,* *A kingly court you tell the truth,* *With underhanded ruse,* *But you get caught, it is abuse,* *For you will suffer their haughty might,* *Your words too strong, to show them light,* *It might bring them angst and fright,* *If magic want, you’d have to play,* *Other ways the dragons slay,* *But that will be the day.*

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

I agree with Liz that this poem is delightful in its pattern, Jasmin. I'm well acquainted with the sheriff here, and I'm always telling him he's the best looking cop I know. He loves the humor, but sometimes his smile has a bit of the barracuda in it....Jerry

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Delightful pattern of verse. Well penned message of what is sometimes required if you write what you feel is the truth and it isn't popular. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by E T Waldron

As Georg says there are both good and bad! Hope this isn't from one of your own situations'-)///ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Good Cop...bad Cop, in TV is a trick to make the dude that done-it to spills his guts.
To me, Good Cops were those that fearless stood they ground on 9/11 to Serve and Protect, the bad cops? those that shot Serpico and are on the take.
The Blue Line should clean their ranks by themselves, by the true good cops, not by the power-crazy jerks of I.A. (internal affairs to you, where everybody is guilty no matter what)
Put a bumper sticker sayiong "I do support the Good Cops"

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

The thought police - the very worst kind.

And it doesn't surprise me that my brother Georg Edvard patented a word that is 'smelly!'

Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri

WOW now that is truly using triplets. Jasm in you are the triplet Queen of the Den, keep up the great work
My best yo you
Tuchy