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Becoming whole
by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER → (All Poetry by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER)
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The question I not often enough ask on my journey through life, Am I following my own beat, or someone elses, because it's more accepted?

 

 
 
 
Have I marched today?
Have I been in tune and step?
With that my heart does say?
Do I pray that prayer still?
The one my heart beats faster,
Or followed someone else’s will,
That led me to disaster,
 
Am I on that road, that track?
The one that leads to where I’m going,
As the wind was at my back,
Does my heart and soul still ask?
Does it demand an answer still?
Are we successful at our task?
How do you focus our will?
 
Or have we found a road less rugged?
Or a drummer mad as hell,
On our way to kick the bucket,
I am asking, you’re the judge,
I am your heart and soul,
Just know this, the end you cannot fudge,
Become a being whole.©24/08/2009
 

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 Reviews of "Becoming whole"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
You have me thinking now Jasmin! I like your
questions,and knowing, you will have the right answers!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
Seems that my road is one going always up with no top insight, but I will continue to climb just for the heck of annoying those that expect me to quit!

Georg


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
life is indeed a journey of varying experiences ... we moved onward becoming more and being whole, as long as we seek and explore our creative longings and relationships ...

powerful reflective poem, Jasmin ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Jasmin,
Strong challenges in the questions, the search for meaning and direction we all must go through.

John

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Good message, especially that direct ending.

Reviewed on August 24, 2009
You ask some mighty wise question in this poem, Jas! Are we not formed by all our life's experiences, and those who were a part thereof? Fortunately, there is Guidance from Above that smooths out our "gouged mistakes". We learn from our journey, and stopovers, of living. You make us think, dear friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
well asked and understood. We are where we are meant to be I only ask that it is His will not mind that I ponder. LadyJ

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Jas, this is a question that can only be answered by the petitioner, but we have all asked it from time to time. Well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Become a Being - powerfully stated, my friend. These sad days, I often think that nonhuman earthly beings have somehow managed to retain their hearts and souls, while we have very sadly lost ours by following the wrong path in life.


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