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Who loves ya now?
by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER → (All Poetry by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER)
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Ed, poem this morning inspired that little question, after the destruction of all that sustains us, what will have become, why would anyone care?
God you say, but you destroyed his world he made for you..... looking for paradise in all the wrong places......

 

 
 
 
I just wonder often,
What defence there is,
What possible excuse,
Which one could I use?
And once I am alone in space,
Where just spirit has its place,
Alone a spinning top an atom,
A living link will fathom,
To all I have destroyed,
In ignorance enjoyed,
Will ever I regain that trust?
Come back to earth I must,
Or spin this eternal dance alone?
Will forever, this be my home?
No loving hearth, no warmth’s,
No one, to hug or hold,
Not a bird comes near,
Not a bunny, or a deer,
No pooch with puppy eyes,
No one for me now cries?
Have I destroyed that seed?
In my want and greed,
That once my heart did feed,
Compassion, love, all,
On who’s love I ask, will I now call?©10/01/2010

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Reviewed on January 11, 2010
One of the most profound poems I have ever read. Thank you Jasmin for making us think.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on January 11, 2010
Well, reading your words and then those of your reviewers, I can only say, The Trickle Down effect may yet save us...if one person strives to do better and another person joins...and so forth...if your words (and Ed's) cause the pebble- in- the- pondripples, maybe all is not lost...love? yes, need that!

And if not, maybe another ice age will wipe this earth clean - for a new start.

Gina...it is Monday morning

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 11, 2010
looking for paradise in all the wrong places......

You've very succintly describe mankind, today, and I fear it will be our children and grandchildren who suffer the dire consequences of our mis-guided actions.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 11, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
Jasmin,
You think and probe well and deep here...our condition, our behaviour and our fate. I like!

John

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
Oh man, this is spot on. Spot on to the way I'd think walking our pet Labrador in the 80's through the Forrest seeing houses built where nature one played. I remember thinking back then, that they'll be a few yards showing how life was for men. Indeed, Ed's poetry awakens the soul, but there needs to be another without fear or negative agenda to well almost start a riot, a civil war for Earths survival. Ed is a visionary and never take his words lightly.

Well said, now for action.


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
They said that after hundred years after your death nobody will remember you...and I wonder, after man destroyed everything, who will be left to remember him?

Georg



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