Life's circle (poem) by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER on AuthorsDen

Life's circle
by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER → (All Poetry by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER)
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On Passing, that lifeless stare is now focused inward, with different eyes

With eyes turned inward, toward the soul, all his being, his whole, right from his start, His journey through life, his actions, or not, his whole life; his lot, his bliss or his strife, A microchip size, it repeats every pattern, every step, every turn, all truth, and all lies, With this he lies buried, of particle dust, but seeing he must, this cannot be hurried, An eternity world, of imprints and knowing, the seeds he’d been sowing, before him unfurled, Though it’s a moment, eternity’s time, when all things will rhyme, or deeply torment, New roots will nourish, from dust you sowed, and grass you mowed, others you nourish, In every tree, in every blade, your living state, of you and me, recesses so deep, that memory trap, always you tap, you sow what you reap.©31/01/2010

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on February 13, 2010

You're so right here, Jasmin. We become not only what we do, but what we think. We are the sowers of our destinies and the character we become in the inwards........Jerry

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 1, 2010

You pack this one tight, Jasmin, there is so much here and so much left to the reader to interpret...and for me that's always good.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Once again your words give me pause for thought, Jasmin. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

I wonder what kind of foot tracks left those that go through life trying to go forward as they are bogged down in a mud land of uncertainty.

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Quite thought provoking, my friend.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Jasmin,
Deep thoughts! Sometimes these type of moments can stir our creative sides, and sometimes they can squish them. Course, it's these moments that make us feel small in comparison. Nicely penned.
Sheila

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Very profound reflections,dear Jasmin!
You make us ponder deeply! Superb!

Love and hugs,
Eileen