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Living Hell
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Living Hell

Pouring raindrops streak my face
As I trudge a God-forsaken place…
No direction, I wander alone
Leaving behind a so-called home…
Each moment quickly overlaps
Time trickles through my weary grasp…
Anger whips my burdened soul
Hurt…the greatest pain I’ve known…
Every dash of hope long since gone
With my head hung low I stumble on…
Screams stuffed silent, rage in my ears
Filling my eyes with hell-bent tears…
My shadow on a sidewalk crawls
Upon bruised knees I hopelessly fall…
I hold my face within tired hands
I wonder who, if anyone, understands…
I close my eyes to finally rest
Death seems a freedom from this mess…
I awake, oh God, burning from the sun
As yet another day in Hell’s begun!

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 Reviews of "Living Hell"
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Jayne,

Home is where one hangs his hat. Very effective writing.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 18, 2007
So very bitter and angry, a sad write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 18, 2007
Welcome To Club,i.e. We All have Cross To Bare Sum More Than Others!

If You Made It Thus Far If You Get Back Up After You Fall You As I Will Make It To The (Your) End...

Now You Should Turn Around Walk Away Never Look Back..

Credit For Outstanding Write...

TRASK

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2007
well, done here. For the grace of God at 16, there go I. I see you are new, I'd like to welcome you and look forward to your journey here. Lady J


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