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Building a Sand Castle
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Poem from the book "Lost in a Tavern" by Liana Marie.


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From Chapter 4: Found?

'Building a Sand Castle'

Watch me build a castle;
A great sand castle by the sea...
With lots of windows
And a big strong wall...
I’ll keep it from falling
Like the rest of it all.

I’ll keep it from washing away
To the ocean.
I’ll keep it from crumbling back down
To the sand.
A fortress, my castle...
Built with my own hand.


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 Reviews of "Building a Sand Castle"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
Symbolically powerful in meaning, Liana Marie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
This poem has so much to offer that it glows with warmth as the writer's heart builds the walls to protect the soft tissues so easily hurt or washed away like the grains of sand when hit by a wave. Sweet.

Fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2007
Great write...Hugssssssss

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Liana,

Metaphorically speaking, everyone builds walls or castles to safeguard our vulnerabilities least our whole world come tumbling down. Outstanding write. I must look into that book.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
How sweet and endearing a piece this is. Built many a sand castle, always including a moat, but alas....when the tide came rolling in......it was gone. Good write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on May 15, 2007
THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR UNIQUE REATIVE TALENT.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Great metaphor, so many of us build our hopes and dreams, only to find they were just castles in the sand, awaiting the tide to turn..

Reviewed on May 15, 2007
I used to love building sand castles as a child.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
and your own words...great imagery


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