I am re-trying to express the various feelings that human beings encounter during their lives.
The Human Experiences II (An Explanation)
When I wrote “The Human Experiences” I thought it would remind us about our obligations As human beings and what we are in the universe. After posting this write I received several reviews. I concluded that most of our colleagues are Sensitive for what I wrote, and I was grateful I would have wished however, that another meaning Would also have been "understood" And in order to make myself clearer, I decided to elaborate further By bringing a small story If three people go hiking to enjoy nature, It is clear that when they return home Every one will relate his enjoyment. Although, they were all in the same place Everyone will relate this excursion differently. One will relate about the beautiful sky, Another about the color of the fields, And other about the physical strain of the hike In one word, everyone had a different perception. What they do not mention are the various good feelings That every one felt in his body and soul, While this is the most relevant power that unites us These feelings are the feelings of love. These feelings will be propagated in the universe and Come back to us, amplified, and help us and others in life This is what I meant by writing: we all have different feelings These positive feelings will help us face the future. It is not only our obligation to help others, But first and foremost: To keep ourselves at our highest, most positive, loving level This not only helps ourselves, But helps all who benefit from the stream of love.
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I think Larry described it well with his term T.E.A. They are the three (should enclude speech) four things that mirror who we are.
Your explanation is explicit and precise in stating the versatile minds of man as related to their perceptions. You are also right about people not expressing their gentler emotions of feelings of love and friendship for one another.
The poise and grace and dignity of past periods in my history showed folks with gentlier and loving natures. I think the protocol of many good societal traits from the past are lost in today's scattered cultures. Truly we need moral unity and fortitude.
I use the term T.E.A. in my writing-(Thought-Emotion-Action), and in the case of people's perception; when they get a good feeling and relay it through such actions as hello's or smiles; it is contagious. Enjoyed
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Love, Christine
Your explanation is explicit and precise in stating the versatile minds of man as related to their perceptions. You are also right about people not expressing their gentler emotions of feelings of love and friendship for one another.
The poise and grace and dignity of past periods in my history showed folks with gentlier and loving natures. I think the protocol of many good societal traits from the past are lost in today's scattered cultures. Truly we need moral unity and fortitude.