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Messy
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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I have categorized this under "Music" because I thought it would be good as a piece set to lyrics! How many of us can say that we have a spic and span place 100 % of the time?

My closet floor,

MESSY!

My dresser top,

MESSY!

My relationship,

MESSY!

My Bed,

MESSY!

My Desk,

MESSY!

My floor,

MESSY!

YET, AT LEAST I know where everything is!
(grin)

Written July 5th, 2004 by Becca Henry 4:47pm CST
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Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
Very creative!

Reviewed by Timothy Houlahan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2004
this is getting scareing just how simalar we are because my place looks like a bomb hit it as well.everything you mentioned and more.

Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Hey I thought that was the way things was to be MESSY. Once I put stuff in order never can find it here,
Tommy

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
How true this is!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
hahahaha
know the feeling
great job!!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 7, 2004
Messy Just Like Human Life Is ,i.e. Unless You Clean It Up-

EXP.,I Have Mexicanos Friend a Medy Man Who Said To Me, If You Think Mexicans Are Dirty You Do Not Want To Be Around Central Americans_

He Was Medy Man For 17 Years In Los Angeles Which Is Filthest Place in World To Live,i.e. He Could Not Get Over How Clean Of Person I Was Even With All My Stuff(Of My Lost House) Now In My Hole in a Wall Apt.

TRASK

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on July 7, 2004
and don't ya just get peeved when someone comes along and MOVES something!!!...hahahhahah....liked this a lot, Becca.

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2004
Messy..but I know where everything is....tha's my escuse too
cute, brava.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2004
LOLOL. Sounds like my home. Guess that's what wives are for...

Reviewed on July 7, 2004
cute write, rebecca! well done! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 7, 2004
Its time you cleaned up that mess Becky ...Te he ..Lol

Have a nice day

love

Peter Paton


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