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The train whizzes by
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I thought I would try my hand at Children's poetry, again. Comments are welcome, good and bad. I apologize for not having written comments on others poems. I shall try and get back to that when time comes.
A gravel road with brown rails. What a funny noise the box car makes as it goes by, "Choo, choo!" I sit in the passenger car and watch the world go whizzing by. Written on March 21, 2007 by Rebecca (Becca) P Lang at 6:49pm CST, DST. All rights reserved. (c)

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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

What a charming write, Becca; very well done! You capture the excitement that trains bring to kids; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Becca,

I love trains, and you capture them in engaging, rhytmic poetry that clacks into the brain. LOVE it. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Becca this is great, write on and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Whooo...whooo!!! Thanks for sharing, Becca. I can see this with the picture of a train. Love and peace,

Regis

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