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The JERK!
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
  
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How my relationship with Timothy is suddenly going no where fast! I have come to the conclusion, after already writing him, that we should not be together at all and I should go my seperate way. We talked on the phone tonight and he was a real A** about it all! He said I should stay with him! Ain't no body gonna make me do any thing I do not want to do! Ya hear me Timothy?

 


     You wined me with letters,
     One every week,At first,
     Now I get ONE,A MONTH,
     IF I am LUCKY!
     I was surprised By the flower,
     In the mail,Yesterday.
     That was So very sweet!


     You call, BUT Not often.
     Yes, I Do realize it is Expensive.
      I try to Call 1-2x a month
     And that is GOOD for me~!
     We are broke & poor Tim. 
     Kris & Mom have No health insurance.
      I got lucky! 
      Julie and Anna have NO HEALTH Insurance either!
    And they have families to feed!
     You are being a BUTTHEAD about
     wanting me to have sex, and I cannot believe
     I even ANSWERED your questions about sex.
    You are SICK, and obsessed with me from a long
    distance. Why have you been hanging on all this time?
    And what is the deal with your "rich parents" ?
     That does not sound right either.
   Why are you Scottish yet living in Australia?
    Your last name is Irish and your brother's name is Sean.
    He has red hair too! I was a fool to think I could
      not find any one else. There are more fish in the sea.
     Hell, I have not even MET you yet!
     If you ever come over here, you can stay in the hotel
     next to the bank. That is a big IF though.
     There is a part of me that would just like to keep it a
     long-distance relationship and rely on pictures sent 
      in the mail. That would be much better.
    Comments welcome.  Thank you.
     Written September 30th, 2003 All rights reserved.


     Copyright 2003


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Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on December 18, 2003
You go, girl!! :) Chin up! DON'T [settle] -- Jeff

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Wow!! Glad I am not alony one!!

Bravo on you Becca!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on October 1, 2003
(((becca)))

you deserve better than that--you tell him

powerful, heartfelt write

(((HUGS))) and i'll be praying for you

love,

karla. :(

Reviewed on October 1, 2003
You tell him; he sounds like such a loser! You can do better than that, and you don't need him cluttering up your life! Go with your heart; and to hell with him! Good venting poem! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend, Karen Lynn in Burleson. :(

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Thank you for your comments guys. It really helps to know I have ya'll's support. I am through with him!

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Sounds like you have discovered a special strength within yourself. Perhaps encouraging the growth of such strength may lead to a better relationship in the future. More power to ya.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Hi Becca,,,this is sad....Long distance relationships are difficult to say the least...and on internet...many times people profess to be what they are not...I would not ever trust it....I would want to meet the person face on.....its the only way to really see the heart...people can be so false on this internet...you are sweet...find someone worthy of you...I wish you well always...very emotional write...floria


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