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I See You Clearly
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Sometimes we don't see the forest for the trees!


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"I See You Clearly"

by Amber Moonstone 7/20/07

Volcanoes erupting like passion
Emotions flowing like lava
You are a wolf in sheep's clothing
making me want you and then running off.

Volcanoes erupting like impatience
Emotions flowing out of control
You urge me on toward your secrets
and then you leave me out in the cold.

Volcanoes erupting like a painful tear,
Emotions flowing, but you do not hear,
You tease me with your promise,
then you leave for selfish fulfillment.

Volcanoes erupting like passion,
Emotions flowing like lava,
You will not harm me any longer
I am looking right through you!

author's notes:
Just a rude awakening, some people can be very oblivious as to how their behavior affects other people!

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 Reviews of "I See You Clearly"
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
hmmm a wolf...hmmm sounds like an idea to explore lovely poetry

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2007
gosh, no this lesson well. Nice right, great words. Lady J

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 21, 2007
Oh you are so right my friend. Some do not even care, it is like they have no conscience, no soul. Well written piece....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on July 21, 2007
YES! so sad but true Amber "V"
Well written!
Love the metaphors!
They're also VERY draining
of YOUR own Positive energy and flowwwww!
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
Namaste!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
God Bless!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
Excellent writing,enjoyed...Hugsssss

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
So true how some care not how they hurt others. This is an excellent poem defining your intentions.

Eileen

Reviewed on July 20, 2007
So sorry that some seem so careless of hearts. Well penned and very effective.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
So true, they clear out your emotional bank balance then go, then can't see them for dust...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
Yes it is true, the pain that a calous cold hearted person can wield to someone of a kinder temperment is terrible for sure.

Fee

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
Amber, this poem is an illustration of how sometimes we can be deceived and not realize just how self-centered a person can be until we get to know the real person. This is an excellent write & I'm sure many readers will relate to this. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
a good write about too many fols who just blindly plow through life

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 20, 2007
I completely agree, Amber. A meaningful and emotive write. Thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,

Regis


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