Amber & William, a collaboration that interweaves into a powerful poem, bringing images of beauty & reality and a longing to see the face of a daughter you've never seen...touching & sad. A great write!!
Amber the water, William the stone, the stone fell into the water and they become one...the one that gave this poem ripples which are reaching the far away shores.
Do it again, it works!
Georg
My hat is off to both of you on such a creative masterpiece. Enjoyed this one very much.....
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
a visual feast; stunning collaboration. ...a wee haunting and ethereal mingled together. . .. such beauty, such breaking. ...
ness
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
Beautiful collaboration Amber and William...walking on the beach sets
a great atmosphere where deep thoughts rush in...sad ending, yet a joyous one to see a clear image of a daughter you have never seen...outstanding work of art...Hugs, Peggy
It's my pleasure to collaborate with Amber
Who has proven her wonderful talent here at
"Our Den"
Thank you Amber, for given me the privilege
To share one of your sacred thoughts placing them
on blank parchments
as we together crossed quills
we scribed with the ink of inspiration.
Peace be with you
YES! this is quite beautiful and serene Amber (Viv) and William!
Done so sweet in a warm unison of a treat!
Write On!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
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Do it again, it works!
Georg
Be safe,
Karen
ness
a great atmosphere where deep thoughts rush in...sad ending, yet a joyous one to see a clear image of a daughter you have never seen...outstanding work of art...Hugs, Peggy
Who has proven her wonderful talent here at
"Our Den"
Thank you Amber, for given me the privilege
To share one of your sacred thoughts placing them
on blank parchments
as we together crossed quills
we scribed with the ink of inspiration.
Peace be with you
Love
William
Done so sweet in a warm unison of a treat!
Write On!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
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