When the World Ends (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

This was what is in your heart in this Month of May. It is a long month and plenty of time for questioning God's workings and the things that are happening in today's world. you were led by God to write this muse whether you believe it or not. We need to hear things like this on the den and it can be passed around and around and we will never tire of it, so put your thoughts together whenever and good this like this do not be afraid to show and write.

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

I will always care for you Amber my friend but when the world ends I plan to be in Heaven

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 24, 2008

Your muse is testing your wonderful talent
Even when dry of inspiration ink, you write about it,
That in its self is inspirational.....writing about
I do and find it relieving
Love& Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

Amber i like this very much and i believ it is very creative how you put it together
All the best
Tuchy

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

NOthing in the UNIVERSE that You are missing - because no mattter how the objects of your Love change as long as you stay faithful to Love you have LOVE and that Mysterious Heart that is always Yours (PS: I once wrote a jazz instrumental titled: "Mysterious Heart")
Just a thought branch shot off of your poem...Best, Michael

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

BEAUTIFUL, LIKE ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

We all claim to go through writers block from time to time as I am right now but the truth is when we put our words on paper then we have written no matter what they say. Thank you Amber for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

Many now believe the world is, indeed, ending. Perhaps your muse believes so as well.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 23, 2008

If you need to ask, you don't believe on Gallant Warrior's words when he said of going all the way with his Little Eagle to that place where the Sun enters the womb of Mother Earth every sunset.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

A verse to ponder Amber! As for the rest we all read and write more than most poets and need to be refueled like any vehicle,we can't run on empty;-)Ideas will come to mind as your brain refreshes itself!...ET

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Sometimes it is best to write what is there than to expect. :-)
Doubt and questioning are needed too, sometimes.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Nice abstract! Too much angry, hateful energy in the cosmos these days. As for your lovely piece you incorporate so many feelings in such a lovely and heartfelt way....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Outstanding wordIngcise in poetic grand...
"When the World Ends" shines.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

A deep emotional write my friend, I think we have all ask ourselves this question if not we will in time. It is comforting to know that God always loves us no matter what, he loved us from our first breath of life and continues to love us our remaining days...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Amber the one that will love you from Beginning to end would be
God,who never stops loving us
He will always walk with you be there for you
Even days after eternity
Beautiful inspiring thoughts!

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Amber, God loves you from the beginning to the end and He will always be there for you. When it is Human love, it can sometimes be deceiving and can end quickly.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Amber,

I know One Who will love you for now and eternity: the Lord. :) Human love is conditional ... I would hope love for another would transcend time. Thought provoking excellence - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

A noteworthy question that many of us ask of the love in our lives. We all want to believe that love will last until the end of time. Well done, Amber.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Amber, congratulations to your muse. - Gene