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Abysmal Fog
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This photo inspired my poem, I felt like that girl on the swing and channeled this poem..

Abysmal Fog By Amber “V” Moonstone 8/29/08 Moments of peaceful reflection, knowing your spirit, your essence, Can renew my inner safety. You watch as I struggle with the abysmal fog that dwells within my lonely heart. Suspended in this fog, Not knowing which way to turn, Which way the Universe is calling me, I swing above the fog, Carelessly and aimlessly Disregarding my commitments And call your Essence to mine, Bonding in the glory and peace, That it always brings me. Come to the abyss, Where you shall rescue my Ever lonely soul that has longed For your tenderness, love, warmth, and my redemption. author's notes: While channeling this poem, I felt as if I was this person in an abysmal fog. Peace, love, and light, Amber "V" Moonstone

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Its a sad write but its true sometimes
pictures can trigger how your feeling
at that instant and become the person on that image!!
Don't lose hope your soul mate
will come when you least expected!!
Just stay positive!!
Brilliant write
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Yearning for a like-minded heart, Amber...loneliness can only well up so long and then when you least expect it, a potential soul mate swings out of the fog into the light of your aura...if you haven't go find a kind soul who does aura portraits and channel your colors of the rainbow to come out of Abysmal Fog...usually these feelings you are having are no happenstance...you're channeling even now in telepathy...when you feel this strong about something, it appears from out of nowhere...fog lifts so we can see like that Carly Simon song, I can see clearly now...be well.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by jude forese

a deep sense of psychic empathy in this most creative poem ...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

There are places, people, and even photographs that speak to us in a way that only we can understand. Nice writing, Amber.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 1, 2008

It is amazing how some photos or art work will transpose our hearts, souls and minds into another time or place and allow us to write from there...well done Amber.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Dear Amber, Hope know you will come out of this fog, but this poem is very nice, indeed

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

well done

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reading this lovely poem I felt a gentle feeling hope and quiet...
Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

.. makes me think of 'Silence is Golden' a quiet time in the fog to reflect and listen to ones self.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Amber
This is a beautifully written Poem
one I savored reading with gusto
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

beautiful--there is certainly a quality of great depth in this

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

I felt like being in an abysmal fog today. Another holiday with out my Tom, so hard to bear still. Loved the photo, another good inspiring one and so eye catching. You are doing great, only wish peace could come to all like it seems to have come to you somehow.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

A lovely emotive poem.