Love Potion #21410 (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 18, 2010

LOVELY , filled with vivid images and pure passion!!.....M

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 17, 2010

As we recieve this coming EVE, not past
but the feelings will last!
Love this different style of a poem from you Viv!
May the magic take "US" farrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
as it's transferred onto the next revealing star!

Blessings and Harmony, SOULFUL_PurplePaSSionsSHEEoxxo
WRITE ON!
READ ON!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on February 17, 2010

a potent potion, indeed. I especially liked the segue from thing/"eve" to person/Eve. Well done.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 15, 2010

Wooooooow this is a passionately written poem! marvelous potion. Missed your lovely writes

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

passion, enchantment and mystery illustrate this delightful poem ...

nice one, Amber ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

hmmm-out of my league--good write!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

Oh my goodness... so how can Potion Number 21510 possibly top THIS tomorrow...????!!! :)) It's Abercrombie & Fitch Fierce that does it for me, and it looks by the state of your Cosmos Lady above that she has downed a bottle already! The muscular tautness of this write speaks of total engorgement AND of total engagement such that mind, body and soul are fit to bust! If intentions and desires could be envisioned and willed into manifestation, then this is a poem that is bursting its buttons to do so. Your mutual ocean is as Johnny Cash's Burning Ring Of Fire and makes me think of seas turning red as all the ships burned during the wars in passionate pursuit of Helen of Troy. Surely this kind of "love is as unquenchable as many waters and unyielding as the grave". A strong and impassioned exhortation to the Man Of Your Dreams. Happy Sweet Heart Day, Amber! :)) xx

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

Lovely poem. Happy Valentines day to you.

GOD BLESS
tony

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

Beautiful write Amber
now send me some of that "love Potion"
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

...I am just wondering what potion #21411 can possibly do to top this? This is magically delicious~
Happy Valentines Day Amber
:)Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 14, 2010

Magical Love Potions are Marvelous!