Dreaming Of Her (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 13, 2012

wow this is super romatic I so like this.....reading some of your other stuff......need to clear my head...........this is so good Amber. like it!!!lot's

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2010

I see myself, here, racing off to sleep quickly--kicking company out of the house in a hurry to bed, and dreams! Thanks for this, it is much deeper than my previous words describe, and I do feel and see the many angles of persona embedded in the writing. You amaze me, Amber.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 6, 2010

there are so many types of sorrows in life
it is powerful to read these emotions inside
as if we all know him...but we don't
we know this feeling...
Compassions Embracing Peace
Love & Blessings Vickie

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

This is a great poem Amber.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

Amber...this one ROCKS! A battle within ones self in your words...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

He is fortunate to find such angelic relief in his dreams. I guess if I could look at both my left side brain and right side brain I'd be certifiable. Patrick

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

Excellently posed, this beauty of a prose. I'll be keeping this one. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

...if life could be so easy, but it is not always the way..we need to structure our well being to the best we can...great write Amber~
Love
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

"...torn between two worlds..." when one is not enough.
Excellent dreaming!

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

Dreams can truly bring comfort.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 5, 2010

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

Yearning and longing. At least he had his thoughts of her. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

such love! a lovely write

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

It is difficult to write a response when your eyes are tearing. You have brought me to that state with this poem.

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

Such heartache and anguish expressed in this poem, Amber.
Well done!
Blessings & Peace, Holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

You capture well the feelings of yearning and wanting all separated lovers feel. Well done Amber.
fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

Perpetual motion and constant abrasion
occupies most of his hours...

Seeing both sides of his mind
only brings more confusion
and indecision,
letting fear rule his world

Amber, you have such insight into, and empathy with, hearts and minds - as if you can see right into them and absorb their joy or pain, or as if you are a natural interceptor of what's being projected to and from them. These lines in particular stood out for me, but the whole is written with clarity of visoin and with understanding. I love the way your analysis is written: matter of fact yet sensitised by your choice of language - and especially how you conclude with the touchy-feely soft-focus of the dreamscape, covering all the hard-edged detail like a welcome mist. One of your recent bests, I think. xx

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

Poor feller seems sort of "Cornfused"
Like the king that dreamt every night her was a pauper
And the Pauper that dreamt every night he was a king
The pauper was the happier of both
The king feared each night, to dream once again he'll be a pauper
Love & peace be with you

The pauper

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

Yes. Dreams can be an escape from a life to hard to deal with, sometimes so much that they spill in to the waking life. Beautiful poem.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on March 4, 2010

This wonderful writing is like a mirror of my being, Amber. I remember dreams vividly. And my dreams are always in the romantic realm. I think as is all of your writings this piece was extremely well crafted. You are a top notch writer.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony