Surrender To Survive (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on July 20, 2010

wise advice contained in a fine poem.

Reviewed by David Maclellan

Reviewed on July 19, 2010

An inspiring mantra to live by Amber...
'Surrender,
Succumb,
Relinquish, and Survive!'
I love it!
Warm regards,
David

Reviewed by J.A. Aarntzen (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2010

You can't help but surrender when you read such inspiring and positive verse. Beautifully done Amber

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

we were designed at the beginning to time, constantly in motion to catch up with ourselves ... when we do, the cycle is complete and we move on to another sea of evolving egos ... a successful state of transformation is surviving death and embellishing our spirits with the creative energy of what we are becoming ...

great poem, Amber ...

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

Viv! Your words & photo!
Surrendering with Beautiful Release
& Abandons Tranquility!!
Embraces & Humbles
Revitalizing Through Your Vibrations
Vickie

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

YOU CALL IT, 'THE UNIVERSE', I CALL IT, 'THE ONLY ONE AND TRUE GOD'. OUR TERMINOLOGY IS DIFFERENT BUT I DO BELIEVE WE ARE, IN ESSENCE, SPEAKING OF THE SAME THING. SO, YOU ARE RIGHT...FOR ONLY THROUGH COMPLETELY SURRENDER TO GOD, CAN ONE SURVIVE. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

Released energy witnessed by nature is a good thing Amber~

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

You...have encountered the essence of that Energy that flows from the very beginning of time, positivity, creativity, that exhilerating source that many wish they could just....feel

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

well written - humble

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 17, 2010

Survive?
I am pretty good at that, been doing all my live,
Love is just part of living, living is part of dying
one must do one before the other
The very first day of your live begins with your first breath
then one starts dying......
Love is just something that happens, on your journey to dying......
Peace be with you,
hope you find what you are surviving for.......

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 17, 2010

ahhh but what if...we want to do more than just survive, what if we want to soar, what if we want to dance on the stars...maybe we can break out of the preordained destinies and walk a path of our own...
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 17, 2010

Secularism has had its day and its time to surrender and give back to God.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 17, 2010

We need to go with the flow of the Universe

I think we need that very badly, today.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on July 16, 2010

It's all about being in the flow and living in the now, isn't it....because if we don't, who knows what we will miss along the way?

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2010

It was once said that surrendering does not mean losing, just moving over to the winning side!

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on July 16, 2010

Dear Amber,I am impressed by your poem as it corresponds to the truth which I know. Yes we have to surrender to our self and to flow as you mentioned. Love Emile