Feeling Lost (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2010

I wish only Peace and Joy that you have for so long wanted -Blessings

Reviewed on August 10, 2010

no not lost, simply being redirected. brave poem, from a brave heart.

Reviewed on August 10, 2010

Amber a lot of us have been there including Fred and I. Afetr our divorces many years ago from our Ex's, we both went through these feelings.
Too often you were right, people forget to live and they have to live for not only their children and themselves but for each other. Fred and I have been together for 38 years and our one promise to each other is that he will come before others and he promised I will come before others. We stop and think now and always make time to be together, even if it is sitting together to wach a movie or just to chat. Distance can widen overnight. We never part without a kiss good-bye and when we return we greet each other with a kiss. You have a lot in your words and I hope others will take it and run with it. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 9, 2010

So naked, so vulnerable, so on the move and flowing in the right direction. How you speak for many of us, no matter what our personal circumstances, Amber. To be sure, at whatever phase and stage of life we can be "orphan hearts" needing to be anchored in a firm perception of self and of purpose. At such times we have need to deconstruct in order to reconstruct, so stripping ourselves clean and bare is part of the onward progression and process. You are not free-falling but held in a sovereign open palm that keeps you secure and rooted until the desired change comes. Honour the journey, treasure the questions and seek peace for with peace will come freedom and a prevailing equilibrium. Thank you always for blessing us with an insight as to your personal progression from which we also take heart, learn and grow. Bless you, xx

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 9, 2010

When you get that feeling, something is surely about to change. You seek so deligently to find yourself and your place to be lost for long. An honest and meaningful write.

Reviewed by David Maclellan

Reviewed on August 9, 2010

Amber, this is such an incredible outpouring of heart and soul. Believe me when I tell you that I have experienced the feeling of being lost to the world, but as you say, patience and vision will lead you to your nirvana.

Best wishes from a fellow seeker,
David

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on August 7, 2010

An open and honest expression of what is, what was and is hoped for in the future. I of course can relate to those feelings of being lost. They are not pleasant, for sure, but probably essential to our development. yuk! Wish there was a better way. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. May many blessings be yours. J'nia

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Expressive and alive with the earth's movement of time, Amber...it's time for change and love...sweeping your aura with the fine grit of sea sand...patience...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

"I want to be done with the workplace,
I want to be able to run free to share my spirit
with others of like mind and soul"

i can empathize with these lines, Amber ... an honest & revealing poem spoken from the heart ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Lost, only to be found,,life's process is sure full of up and downs..may you climb upward to fulfill your dreams~
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

"...trying to make a living and forgetting to live.." yes, Amber, you've hit the nail on the head...but what can we do? the practical, the necessary often intrudes on the essential and pushes it aside, and we end up lost souls. You set me off here and I like being set off in this way. Thank you for this fine work and I believe you've found yourself.

John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

splendid determination to forge ahead,in this fine poem,Amber!
I know you'll do it just as you say! etw

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

seems you are shedding what was and embracing what is...and feeling the void between them....

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Beautifully expressed, that it is not one person, but two, and the recovery from the split is possible, "never feel lost again."

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

this is very touching and i'm sure resonates with a lot of people. love the humility and honesty and willingness to explore insights and move forward.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Nothing wrong with a cabin on the shore...but yea sometimes the things we crave the most we must be patient and wait for them.fee

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Amber, So many can relate to the feeling of being lost. Having a family then having then move on is very difficult! You have been focused on all there needs for so long that you feel lost when they leave. I think change is good for the soul. If you are thinking about that cottage on the shore you should go for it! This is your time now to do what makes you happy! You have love in your heart and will meet that man that gives you that spark! Stay positive cause love could be around the corner waiting for that perfect entrance. Take care, ~Chessly

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

chilling Viv!!
How utterly sad too in knowing
having been there...giving away almost all my things
and even one very important thing...yet in releasing this
there is the growth into the wholeness of you...your wants
as a woman aside from being a wife, or a divorcee ect...
your wanting the cottage sounds lovely!!
and sharing with like minds...

I Will Visit With You!!
Within Loves Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Oh Amber, this is exquisite and honest.

I have decided, after feeling lost and alone for most of the time I have been on this odd earthly journey, to just embrace the divine decree of being home in the joy of "lostness" and you of all people are NOT lost!
You just need someone to appreciate you inside and out with kisses that are hot and very hard!!!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

an outstanding write Amber
written from the depths
Of a beautiful heart and soul
Love & Peace

William