I like how this piece is very sensual, almost erotic, but very explosive and energetic at the same time. Words like "erupted" and "explosive", "dynamic" and "exault" are very commanding and convey a sense of power, majesty and motion. However, the poem overall is very colorful and "tastes good" to the reader... at least to me, in my weird way of perceiving things. The second stanza is my favorite, although the second-to-last two are also formidable contenders for my favorite. All of it is really good, though.
When Thomas Beecham was reproached in a shared taxi for humming, he apologised to the irritated woman with, "I'm sorry, Madame, you can only hear my poor effort, but I'm listening to the entire orchestra"...that's what your poem is, Amber, the real deal.
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
Be always safe,
Karen
Regis
as does the passion
you both embrace!!
Love Blossoms
Vickie
John
I hear...Rachmaninov.
Blessings,
Christine
GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
TONY
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