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Letters
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Letters was inspired by my romantic notion of undying love and devotion for that special man.


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Letters

by Amber "V" Moonstone 
2/27/11

Holding my breath
awaiting it's arrival
still no response...

Weekly letters sent,
unanswered, confusion
grips my lonely heart.

Has he moved?
Is he still alive?
Does he not love me any longer?

All unanswered queries,
all sent in letters
pouring out my love and devotion.

Am I a fool?
Months fly by
still no letters.

Has he moved?
Is he alive?
Does he not love me any longer?

It is a year today
since I mailed
the first letter.

I must give up now,
I cannot go on like this
any longer..................................

(His thoughts)

The letters keep arriving
does she not get it?
Is she that stupid?

I can't love her any longer,
I cannot respond
the letters keep arriving.

She is driving me mad,
I can't love her any longer.
the letters keep arriving.

It is my final hour,
I am about to pass on,
I should tell her.

"Dearest Darling"
I have not responded
because I was a coward.

I am not well,
I have been battling
a horrific case of cancer.

I could not bear to let you see me,
I am not the man that you loved,
I want you to know that...

I have always loved you
right up to my very last breath,
Live and find love, my darling"

The letter never arrived....

Ten years pass,
she receives his letter,
she sheds tears of joyful sadness.

 

"Letters" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 


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 Reviews of "Letters"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 7, 2011
Sad story, Amber. You had my rapt attention:)
Sheila

Reviewed on March 6, 2011
Very Sweet, Loving and inspiring of the heart Viv!
With every verse in a lesson to learn!
As you reach out you feel more!
Lots of Love and Hugs, Passionate_Soulful_SHEE oox
WRITE ON!

Reviewed on March 1, 2011
oh, wow....letters are romantic. you can't get an e-mail 10 years later, can you? I had a little highschool romance via letters.....still have them...ahhhh......Morgan

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on March 1, 2011
you know how to break the heart, well penned

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 28, 2011
VERY touching and moving. The pain, passion and longing are woven into the poem .......M

Reviewed on February 28, 2011
Extremely moving poem. Thank you dear Amber.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 28, 2011
beautiful portrayal of this spellbinding yet tragic situation

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 28, 2011
Deeply moving, Amber,
and written with compassion and great word skill.

John

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 28, 2011
Closure is such a precious thing- and can be so fragile...nearly missed.
Too often- missed.
The greatest treasures on the earth- are keepsakes like this letter.

So well done!

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
There is a wise moral/lesson to be learned from your verses, Amber. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Beautiful Amber, this is just so exquisite!

Why does it always have to be so complicated in real life, why does one person choose to turn away when the other has faith, why is it most always so heart-breaking! I just can't rationalize and sanitize it away like so many can. I'm so glad to read your poetry because I see you and I are on the same page.
Ever,
Christine

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
letters of the heart sealed with the lifeblood of tears ... deeply emotive and well written ...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Amber I know I could never write this, for my heart would tear out of me. Beautiful writing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
I DIDN'T FORM AN OPINION UNTIL I READ THE LAST LINE...AND I'M GLAD THAT I DIDN'T. CERTAINLY THE PAIN ON BOTH SIDES IS DEEP AND DEAFENING...BUT THE LOVE...ON BOTH SIDES...LOVE THAT NEVER STOPPED, EVEN YEARS LATER...AH, THE LOVE!!! THIS IS WONDERFUL WORK, AMBER, SO VERY WELL DONE AND SO ENJOYED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Though the pain in this poem is almost unbearable, even
to the reader, I have to say, Amber, that the writing and
the style you chose for your poem are perfect. -gene.

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Amber, This so touched my heart!!! He loved so much that he couldn't bare to see her in pain! He knew that if he told her about the cancer when he was alive she would be devasted! He wanted her to only think of the good things while he was away... Finally closure after ten years. He loved so much that is why the letter took so long to arrive... Love, and hugs my friend. :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Talk about a take-off on the Dear John letter. Very well crafted, Amber.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
So very sad circumstances. Imagine what he was feeling? His love remained but he was in the jailhouse of illness. Great writing, Viv. So very sad.
Love and Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
I think in most casest he heart rules the mind when it comes to love but some times the mind stands up and says...sorry love is not enough or if you love someone enough you will sacrifice what you really want to give your lover a chance for true happiness.
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Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Oh, such a gripping poem...each line a breath....10 years later to finally get an answer that the heart so longed for, beautiful poem of undying love~
Blessings and Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Oh my...this does tear at your heart sweet lady.....stay safe and well..Hugsss,much love to you always...

Reviewed on February 27, 2011
Now this tore my heart out, what more can I say. Masterfully emotive Amber.


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