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Distant Shore
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"Distant Shore"
by Amber "V" Moonstone

3/29/11

The misty air surrounds her
like a warm blanket on a cold night.
Temptation fills her with desirous thoughts
as her eyes turn toward his distant shore.

How can one survive this delerium,
when the fog speaks of many voyages,
so many times lover's have been lost
buried beneath the turbulent waves.

Careless acts of daring,
crossing the frigid waters,
hoping to arrive at a safe harbor,
only to be swept away by remorse.

Fearless endeavors complicate
sensibility and safety,
dashing all hopes for the earnest
that awaits the arrival that never transpires.

Torn between love and honor,
the sailor chooses the later,
and disappoints the stranded lass,
leaving her yearning for his love.

Distant shores become dim,
filled with the misty air of evening,
as shimmering teardrops fill the merky waters,
while standing beneath a crescent moon.

 

"Distant Shore" (c)Amber "V" Moonstone


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Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on April 6, 2011
Amber, That choice is always the hardest to make when your in love...My father used to say: ya gotta do what ya set out to do...If you love something set it free if it comes back it was meant to be...I can relate to this poem that is beautifully written by you! Take care my sweet spirit sister! Chessly

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
such real images and mood, so sad he had to make a choice.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 1, 2011
You paint a vivid picture with your well chosen words and phrases. I enjoyed this piece so much. J'nia

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 30, 2011
The images are exceptional, Amber, filled
with wonder, longing and loss...and waiting
for a loved one and for love is haunting.

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 30, 2011
Awaiting arrival by the shore has got to be the most meaningful and symbolic of all anticipatory or yearning images. An ocean of feeling is conjured by your words here, Amber; feelings that both unite and divide. But, my, is water an amazing conduit and medium of subliminal communications also! You capture all this and more in your words of loss and longing. xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 30, 2011
sailors are controlled by the sea but their loves are always in their hearts ...



sad but beautiful poem, amber ..

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 30, 2011
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
Bittersweetly compelling, Amber; I feel sorry for the lass in your tale. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
Somebody once said to me" I Do Not Trust You Because you're a sailor. This was a women in Norfolk Va. Any how now your poor girl will have settle for a solder. This piece was extremely well written, Viv.
Love and Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
Sad tale, but realistic in many ways. We males are all vagabonds at heart, which the females are the ones who wait and cry. Good word on this, Amber.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
SOMETIMES WE WIN AND SOMETIMES WE LOSE...THANK GOD THERE IS ALWAYS HIS TOMORROWS. SPLENDID WORK AND THANK YOU FOR SHARING, AMBER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
My tears are flowing in compassion for this Heroine, Amber.
A beautiful poem woven with your mystic heartstrings. xx
Ever,
Christine


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