The Temperamental Heart (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 12, 2011

Your metaphor is very effective, Amber. The state that you describe here is just perfect for the way I feel right now. TY.

Axilea

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 6, 2011

The heart is never satisfied until united with its other half. Emotive pen Amber.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

A wondrous piece Amber..such depth of passion..oh I DO fathom it..truly I do..and yes... "The Heart is a lonely hunter,
while seeking it's mate,"
Blessings,
Vesna

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

no one can hold such passion back for very long. well written Amber

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

'...A WATCHED POT, NEVER BOILS...' IN THIS CASE, THIS IS A VERY GOOD THING. ESPECIALLY, WHEN ONE'S HEART IS BEING TEMPERED, WHILE SEEKING...TRUTH. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS EXCELLENT WORK. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

This one felt eerie to me, Amber...a sense of forboding about the future. Nicely done. Love and hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

losing sleep and boiling over are definately images that resonate well in this theme. ......so well crafted, Amber. the picture is so cool with this. Morgan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 29, 2011

There is an animalistic quality to the wanting in this, Amber, like a wolf howling for his mate in a far away meadow. Lots of movement and vibration here combined with a sense of intense longing. Excellent visual images.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2011

this is definitely your finest piece of work of late. you should publish this....i agree with jude's comment 100%, no one says it better.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 29, 2011

an unpredictable heart in indeed a moody creature controlled by strangely enough, the temper of its mental state ... as always, your imagery is effervescent as well as a universal vibration to pulsate upon ...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 29, 2011

I have thi thing of reading what's not written, another great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on May 29, 2011

A Heartfelt write well done and told so wonderfully Laura

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 29, 2011

Love across the universe...I love this theme and your poem says so much.
fee

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

Wonderfully written piece of writing.
Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

Always in tune with universal vibration, Amber,
but at the same time aware of human weakness, anxiety
and need...your perspective is sharp and meaningful.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

"Heart breathes of fire" love this line, your poem is full of emotions bubbling over from within..heartfelt Amber~
love and blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

This is a deep and wonderful poem, Amber, and there are such twists and turns to the path!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

I can relate to the loss of sleep while the heart is restless. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

Indeed, whilst searching for a mate who is on the same level can take a long ole time, as with the search for truth, only truth is found within.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

untamed the heart will pendulum swing in intense emotional upheavels

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

.... oooo yes, Amber! Definitely a jungle pulse to this one and the primeval drumming of that tempestuous heart sends out almost a ritualised message. A mighty love-potion in that cauldron, I'll be bound, conjuring a sense of hot and heavy, racy and pacy. Loin cloths will soon be jettisoned, I reckon...!! :)) xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2011

It's a hit and miss situation at best, but when the heart is temperamental (and whose isn't?) the odds of hearing and believing those magical words, "I love you," are rendered almost nil and void. Urgency is like gasoline poured onto a burning car.

Then again, what have you got to lose. If you don't give it all yo have to give the result will be much the same.

Enjoyed this temperamental piece, Amber.