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Redeemed
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Mercury will be out of retrograde on Friday. YEAH!

 

Redeemed

by Amber "V" Moonstone

9/7/11

The waves lick the shore,
as if desperate to touch solid ground.
Sounds of seagulls screech,
knowing fall is approaching.

The lightning strikes,
thunder booms,
another summer storm
ascending onto the tranquil shoreline.

Waves pound the shore,
desperately seeking solid ground,
The seagulls have found refuge
somewhere south of here.

Torrential rain pours down,
cleansing the humid air,
filling the waves with hope
of misty clarity.

Clouded mind
seeks waves of calming energy,
flowing like the desperate waves,
I stand on the solid ground.

Angels whisper in my ear,
Sleep my child, sleep,
when you awake you will be
Redeemed!

 

Redeemed (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 


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 Reviews of "Redeemed"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2011
Amber, Powerful words to be 'Redeemed'!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on September 12, 2011
solid ground where all sailors and pirates eventually long to be.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
This "sings" to me like a sweet lullaby, Amber; ...rocked by the waves of the sea and the song of the rain. Just lovely! Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
NOT EASY...I MEAN, CHANGING...GOING FROM ONE 'SEASON' TO THE NEXT BUT, IF WE JUST HOLD ON AND BE STILL...THE 'REDEEMER' CAN AND WILL DO HIS JOB, EXCELLENTLY! THERE IS NOTHING LIKE BEING 'REDEEMED'! HALLELUJAH! THANKS FOR SHARING, AMBER...YOUR GIFT IS WONDERFUL. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on September 8, 2011
like this Amber, positive and you can definately feel fall coming lately. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
That is something positive to look foward to. Lovely piece by you, pretty Lady.
Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
Torrential rain pours down,
cleansing the humid air,
filling the waves with hope
of misty clarity.

... words and sentiment as beautiful and soothing as the salvation of redeeming, refreshing sleep itself, Amber. Love this notion of the waves seeking solid ground... May it also be higher ground from which the views and atmosphere are all goooooooooood! xx

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
Love it when you write about the shore and the gulls.
Indeed, dear Amber, love it when you write. -gene.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
wonderful imagery and sense of being!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
Harmonious and vibrant, and oh how I love flannel pajamas!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
And it is just that easy, Amber, an overnight sleep and you will wake up feeling better about yourself and redeemed from what has gone on before.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
Nicley done and presented Amber...Fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
beautiful writing and imagery


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