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Rendevous
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Second changes can be great, if you don't wait too long.

 

Rendevous

by Amber "V" Moonstone
1/29/12

From the darkness,
you peer across the sand
straining to see.
how the blackness of the ocean,

illuminates your mind,
with thoughts of awe
and rememberance of days gone by,
when you were young and vibrant.

Wind chilling your weary bones,
winter has begun,
but the ocean remains the same
as if it were that same dark summer night.

Years have passed since you were to see her,
the dark haired beauty,
standing on the shore waiting for your arrival,
the rendevous that never transpired.

You were delayed,
couldn't get out of the airport,
missed your train,
never arriving on time.

Heartbroken, she left for the countryside,
never to return to the rendevous point,
never to know what happened to you,
never to forgive you for breaking her heart.

Now forty years later,
you try again,
but she isn't there,
she hasn't arrived.

The beach looks the same,
the wind feels the same,
as that fateful night that you
showed up ten hours too late.

As you turn to walk away,
you hear your name being called,
a young girl runs toward you,
She tells you that her grandmother has just died.

You fall to your knees,
and weep for all the lost time,
your second chance now has failed,
and the beach looks the same...................

 

Rendevous (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Rendevous"
Reviewed on February 7, 2012
im gonna go with whet Dark night wrote.....

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 2, 2012
Melancholy...but, while there's life there's hope. I can't help but feel his pain..if only.........

God bless you.

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on February 2, 2012
I think you need to take the initiative-find this guy arrest him and take him to a love nest---o wait this is all just poetry-well pretty convincing stuff-LOL

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 2, 2012
Wow, Amber, you are an inspiring guide with this beautiful lyrical piece that touches the soul ~
You write with such talent and mature wisdom!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on January 31, 2012
WOW! Intense Poetess Viv!
Another Lesson learned too late, but then again WAS IT too late! "A Reason for Everything" I say! Love this Beautiful Touching Life Poem Hon. ooxx Be WELL! and HAPPY!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 31, 2012
painful price for having neglected to have a back-up plan...
very well scribed, poetess!
carolyn

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 31, 2012
How we escape from what should never be..life is a breath..we must take hold of what we can...touching Amber!

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2012
Amber, A lesson in love...
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 31, 2012
So very, very sad.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
THIS REMIND ME OF THAT OLD CLICHE'...'TIME AND TIDE WAITS FOR NO ONE...'. WELL DONE, AMBER, AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE + HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Dear Sweet Amber V, such soul of tragedy
worthy of a stage play, and with the price
of a ticket comes a box tissue...Take Your Bow!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
chances blown usually cannot be recovered ... you have expressed that scenario in an enchantingly sad but lucid perspective ... good one, Amber ...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Heartstopping and haunting, Amber. The "what ifs" forever reverberate and echo through each stirred thought and feeling of our lives and that much-longed for second chance will either be grasped or evaded with the lapse of time - or, perhaps, with the sense of the lack of it, as here. I love your motif of the unchangeing beach... yes, indeed; the physical world remains constant through all of our human passages and travails, tricking us into thinking that time itself stands still. To the unrequited heart, if does. Lovely work as always. xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
The heartbreak of missed opportunity, missed chances, lost romance. There have been so many rendezvous like that. I recall one of my own. Time passes. We can never recall the mistakes we made, only move forward and hope for the best.

The granddaughter was nice twist… We're left wondering if she is his child.

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Heartbreak as he awaits for his love. An amazing poem of
hope avails `Amber`
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Oh my Amber, as this is a deeply touching write, written from a broken heart as this poem gave me tears, Great poetry as always that truly touches the heart. Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
This hits very close to me, Amber. My first wife and I were about to "try it again," but she came down with cancer of the brain and died in agony.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2012
this is deja voodoo at its best, Amber... you set a delicious tone and move with relentlessly eerie precision to a famous final scene that drips deliberate irony all over a deserted debacle... this backdrop is back lit by a moody and sombre moon, Ms. Moonstone... romantic and irredeemably restive all at once...

Be well, live long, laugh often, and never look back... unless you're writing poetry, which of course you cannot help but do well.

Roger


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