I Am Feeling Lost (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on March 19, 2013

if you are still feeling lost you can text me-I do believe you are the only one on this site who has my cell #

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 17, 2013

As intimate as ever, and the finish has a sense of flow, of hope.
Blessings and Love,
Christine

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 17, 2013

hopefully, the more intense you feel lost, the closer you are to being found ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 15, 2013

"...and the light rescues you."
At the core of this poem, Amber,
and it makes so much 'sense' to me
deep down, i can identify with it well,
but as you say in the final lines there is
salvation at the last and tremendous optimism.
i like this a lot.

john

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 14, 2013

An excellent description of loneliness
A sad write for a beautiful poetess, pray the warm rays
Of a new day brings you happier thought
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 13, 2013

Wonderful lines that describe that emotion but sad in it's plea for relief...I know so many who share that same sentiment. Well done.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on March 13, 2013

Good capture of this emotion.

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 13, 2013

A deeply moving poem and so touching Laura

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on March 13, 2013

Your poem is about the life of how I used to feel.

May peace be with you, the love of Christ love surround you and blessings abound you,

John Michael

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on March 12, 2013

Noght can be a very lonely time. Nice that light fills youin the mornings. Loss comes in many forms. Thoughtful and expressive poem.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2013

I really enjoyed this, Amber!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 12, 2013

I certainly hope you're not. This poem evokes the lost love that always comes at night when the world is dark and still.

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 12, 2013

~Amber~
Feel light passing into your soul..let it lift you from
the darkness. Days of light and a rose to smile.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on March 11, 2013

this is a write of utter loneliness during the nights alone
budd

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on March 11, 2013

When you are sorrowful look again in your heart, and you shall see that in truth you are weeping for that which has been your delight. ~Kahlil Gibran~

Bring in the light dear Amber and push away all other things, let the joy flow... Lighten up your house and light candles and meditate on that which is good... "You know"

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 11, 2013

An ode to helplessness and loneliness and very well explained. There can be a darkness without it being nighttime and likewise there can be light in the midnight hour. It is all according to how we feel inside. I understand feeling lost, and have been there many times.