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SIMPLY PUT - Simply Done
by Paul D Berube → (All Poetry by Paul D Berube)
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Guess I'm not with it this morning. This is the best I can do for now.
Have a wonderful day and God bless.
And WRITE ON !

I try to write a poem a day,
But sometimes my thoughts are unclear;
Simply, nothing coming today,
Tell me; where do I go from here?

Went outside and looked at the stars,
Beautiful scene, but mind's still blank;
Took a shower to clear my head,
Simply, no ideas in the bank.

I hate it when the words won't come,
When the verses don't freely flow;
Nothing to rhyme, nothing to say,
Simply don't know which way to go.

Oh my God, look what I've written,
Where the heck did these words come from?
I'd better quit while I'm ahead,
With this line, I am simply done.



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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 22, 2010
PAUL, PAUL....YOU DON'T GET IT BUT, EVEN WHEN A POET THINKS THEY ARE SAYING NOTHING...THEY ARE SAYING A GREAT DEAL. I REALLY DO BELIEVE THAT POETS REALLY CANNOT SAY 'NOTHING'...AND THAT'S THE WAY IT IS. SO THANKS FOR THIS WORK...IT WAS ENJOYED. BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on January 18, 2010
My dear Paul -
We've all been here and felt this!
No matter what you "begin" to share
you have that nuance that shows you care
loving reminders drift in the air
as your final attempt is made clear!
WRITE ON! READ ON! Inspirations will come along....
Blessings and Harmony, SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo
P.S. Can I give you a tip, Go for a ride and go somewhere new, and bring your pad/quill/pen with you. Or try cooking a meal and have your pen nearby, as you attempt preparations, your feelings will swell closer in..I also use my WRITERS REMEDY, Magnetic letters from a Craft Store I found and they have different styles online, *( I will share) from (Get this) Magnetic Poetry.com and it's FUN! It helps you get started... Maybe your Muse needs a rest too, and the BEST is about to come into view! BE Happy! WRITE ON! READ ON!

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
I sure can relate to this Paul " SIMPLY PUT-Simply Done "
What a blessing! God bless you my friend! Yes you write on
you are truly a blessing!


Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Dear Paul, "Guess I am not with it this morning". We can only guess what you would have written, had you been with it. My friend, this is the best way to write a poem. Thank you for sharing, Love Emile

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Love it! Words are either there or just below the surface waiting to bloom upward. I'm awaiting my Muse as she's been down with the flu too.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Often we find inspiration in the strangest places...
fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Yeah, best thing you can do is delete it and try again. LOL.
Seriously, it is in such times that the best comes.
Every write I feel like this.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Simplicity is the best...

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
I think we all can relate to this Paul. Well done.
With Love, Cindy

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
The Lord inspires us all. Good one Paul God bless you always.

George

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Sometimes it seems like the Internet is down, or somebody is working on the lines.
"Your service should be restored shortly, sorry for the inconvienience."
But you pulled it off just fine.

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Oh, the words came alright . . .

Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Look to God; it's obvious He's your inspiration. Hope the words come back! Well done, Paul~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Gerald Tate
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
Well done Paul, keep em' coming.

Gerry

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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