A TRAIL OF REMEMBRANCE - (an Old Man of the Mountain tale) (poem) by Paul D Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 30, 2012

Thank you for sharing the experience, Paul; albeit a bittersweet one. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

Brings him to life more so than ever here.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

Be pleased you had the opportunity to see him. I never did. Patrick

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 26, 2012

I'm with you on that note, Ed.

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on April 25, 2012

Like many departed treasures, the Old Man is a loss to be mourned, for I feel he represents the loss of faith in God. Faith in God sustained our ancestors and built our nation, but is now crumbling. Will it be rebuilt? By the grace of God and the prayers of His people, it could happen.
Like the spot where the Old Man once was visible, our God is visible all around us, no matter if no one else "sees" Him. As you remember the Old Man of the Mountain, let us remember our Father God and make Him our focus for now and always. God save America!
Nice writing once again, Paul!

Connie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Sometimes, even geologic time is too fast. I wonder what time will do to Mount Rushmore. Thanks for keeping the memory alive.

Ron

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on April 23, 2012

It's good when we can recall to remembrance some past experiences, at times, Paul! Good job!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on April 23, 2012

Paul,
I am not from NH but am happy for the 5 years I lived in mA and was able to see the Old Man before he fell.
Budd

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 23, 2012

I know how it feels as we in Newfoundland have the face in the mountain. Great write Paul as usual.

Rose

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on April 22, 2012

This poem kept my attention right to the end. It seems like this old man was much more than a friend. The tale of the old man is a mystery to me. What happened to him still remains to be seen.

Nice cliff hanger Paul. God bless!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 22, 2012

I was talking to a young marathon runner who came down to NJ to run a few weeks ago & he was from NH & said "they" were thinking of rebuilding the old mans face on the mountain...I kinda feel if Nature & God wanted him there, he would not have fallen down in the first place...e