Wonderful form to this piece, Paul like fire, rearranging itself in every stanza! And the cadence was perfect! Seems a poem which should be read in elementary schools, everywhere!
Good advice, especially at times as dry as these in many parts of the country. The strange thing is fires have always been a part of a forest growth and regrowth. Studies have shown that the successful efforts to contain fires over the years have caused many areas that would've had fires to grow heavy undergrowth under the trees, causing the catastrophic fires we see today.
Your poem is surely an eye opener for all. God's animals know when trouble is near but they have to trust us to use good judgement. God help the forest and His precious creatures who live there.
Forest fires are so devestating and you capture that well. I particularly liked the line "will reach out in hunger as it is searching for fresh fuel" attibuting near human attributes which starkly clarifies the carnage it wreaks. Thank you for this reminder for all of us. Be well, Kathy
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Ron
Your poem is surely an eye opener for all. God's animals know when trouble is near but they have to trust us to use good judgement. God help the forest and His precious creatures who live there.
Peace, love and blessings,
John Michael Domino
Connie
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