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Watch Him Run
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'jack m' man flash'

 

See that colt over there fighting the rein
the tall restless one in front
with the mink colored mane

Well place your bets on this handsome steed
With tenacity from his dam and strength from his sire
he'll come from the back and flash to the lead

Sometime shy to the gate while studying the track
he's named Ludwig's Sonata
but the jocks call him Jack

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Watch Him Run"
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on March 20, 2011
well said, pat.

Reviewed on March 16, 2011
I love the excitement and the flow, wonderful

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
Flashy stuff from a proud grandmama. Da Da Da Dommm Patrick

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
Wonderful writing indeed...Hugsss

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
O to have the money to bet. I would bet your horse every time.


Tony

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
You've expressed him expertly, Pat,
with energy and dash.
This is fine indeed.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Oh I love this! And the name...Ludwig's Sonata. Excellent flair to this poem.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Just plain good writing and a pleasure to 'Watch Him Run.'

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
my grandson...'the flash'

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
Where and when do I [place my two-dollar bet,Pat.
I especially like this line:
With tenacity from his dam and strength from his sire...
-gene.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
I'm lost here, sorry Pat. I Googled Jack Flash and found a Clydesdale Jack Flash who's stud fee runs around $1,000.00. Like I said, I am lost, and don't think I know what I'm talking about. Haha!! Regis seems to know about that special "cold."

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
A fine tribute to a special cold, Pat. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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