You hit the nail on the head. Parents unknowingly teach their children bad habits by praising bad behavior and forgetting the good behavior is ignored.
I immediately thought of Psalm 73 when I read your poem. I like the point of view that you used- the voice of a child. Children have such a keen sense of justice and fairness.Enjoyed the imagery.Great poem!
Gary Grasshopper and friends travel to another field to celebrate the birthday of Gary's best friend, Freddie Firefly. While there they encounter a group of cicadas who have been underground for thirteen years.
Ron
~Z.B.McClure
Ah, the wisdom of a child. Even as adults being naughty is more fun!
Mary
Nicely done, thanks Dick
an old friend of mine used to say
'i'm not good, i'm just good at being bad'
Lovely touch here, Pat.
John
Cheers,
Dan