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mommy tell me why
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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when brother throws a tantrum
screams and bites his knee
then it comes to snack time
he always gets morther than me

or puppy digs up your flower be
d
then runs across the street
chews your bestest shoes up
he barks and gets a treat

i watch and i try to figure
doing all the things i should
so why is being naughty
so much funner than being good

 

 


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 Reviews of "mommy tell me why"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 21, 2011
It just is. Till you get caught. Patrick

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on April 8, 2011
dear me, this is a sad little poem, Pat. It's more the story of favourites perhaps. thank you for reading my poem, Waiting Women. Laurel

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 5, 2011
You hit the nail on the head. Parents unknowingly teach their children bad habits by praising bad behavior and forgetting the good behavior is ignored.

Ron

Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
I immediately thought of Psalm 73 when I read your poem. I like the point of view that you used- the voice of a child. Children have such a keen sense of justice and fairness.Enjoyed the imagery.Great poem!

~Z.B.McClure

Reviewed on March 31, 2011
Pat,

Ah, the wisdom of a child. Even as adults being naughty is more fun!

Mary

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on March 31, 2011
Pat, I fear this has been the lament of many a brother, or sister (and probably lots of mother's & father's) since the dawn of time.

Nicely done, thanks Dick

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 28, 2011
..because it is..
an old friend of mine used to say
'i'm not good, i'm just good at being bad'
Lovely touch here, Pat.

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2011
Haha!! Gotta love it. Maybe that's why I've had so much fun in my life, huh? Gotta love it twice. This is just cute.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 28, 2011
A question for the ages...let me know the answer, if you figure it out.
Cheers,
Dan


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