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Shiney Slimey Slug
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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finky  dinkey  icky  poo

oogie  googie  gummy  goo


phooey  dooey  stinky  yuck

fiddle  diddle  mooshey muck


i touched a shiney slimey slug today

my feetsies were bare what else can i say...

it made for an ooshy gooshy day

 

 


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 Reviews of "Shiney Slimey Slug"
Reviewed on November 6, 2011
Ha! perfect kid poem, luv it!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 27, 2011
"Sluggishly" most effective; delightfully concocted, Pat. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 19, 2011
Icky sticky slimy slug
Crawled right into my beer mug
Found he had no place to go
He became my escargot

Patrick

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 17, 2011
I love good wordplay and this one is really something kids would enjoy. I hope you are sharing it with them.

On the other hand, I recently discovered escargot. It's hard to believe that the slimy creatures can be cooked in a way that makes them taste like chewy beef and not at all slimy like okra–uughh!

Ron

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 14, 2011
Tooooo cute! My grandson is going to love this, Pat! Thanks for the smiles this morning!

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 14, 2011
Gotta love this, Pat,
it's marvelous - language, pace,
setting...everything!

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2011
Yuk. I like 'em battered'n fried.

I'm glad I checked over here, because I don't remember getting an update for this poem, and I would have remembered it because of the name. Anyway, battered'n fried, Coors Light . . .

Naw, I don't drink anymore, except for my one glass of cheap California burgundy before bedtime, which is coming up.

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on September 13, 2011
Just the thought makes me yukky mukky. My grandson has a slug that is about 3 inches long, and quite fat and slimey. Shudder!

Connie

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 13, 2011
funny, funny, funny...
Cheers,
Dan


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